Here

It's not complete, but there's a sneak peek.

Please provide feedback, and keep in mind that I'm 17...

I know you posted this a couple months ago, but just really wanted to let you know that your writing is terrific. Grammar and repeat words aside, it's extremely powerful and brimming with very colorful imagery. The passage gives you quite an exhilarating sense of power at the end, given Samantha's choice. I would love to see where the story takes her, and maybe more elaboration on the events leading up to that point, but it most definitely had me interested.

Aw! Thank you so much! <3