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1st drawing -->> 2nd -->> 3rd -->> 4th -->> 5th

I would like some critz on my first wig cw plans. :) Suggestions are lovely. 🌈

I think the rings are kind of cool. Although I think it needs a bit more detail with the shading. It just doesn't quiet look right.

TuT Mmm. Thank you for the note. :) Is there a specific area where the shading is not so great? (I wanna assume it's on the right. ><; )

[edit] Yea... the top right. Merp.

Though anywhere besides that top right?

I think it'd look better if you had the hair on the other side too rather then just pulled over to the left. Another thing is that you would have to do a different style of shading on the wig since right now it kinda appears like you used the dodge/burn technique. What I suggest is zooming in and using a darker(warmer) brown/reddish hue and cell shade. Remember you need 3-5 layers of shading in total(this also includes highlights). So you could do two layers of shading and one layer of highlights and so on.

o3o I might try the "add hair on other side too" thing. And if "dodge/burn" is the lil drop list of effects that layers have... then yes. I did use that. :x

And I have heard of cell shading. I no understand eet. But I think I will see if I can find a tut or guide.

Thank you for zeh crit. :3

Yeah like hisan said the style of shading is wrong. This is a tutorial on the proper shading and it's really good. :)

http://subeta.net/forums/view/826482

Haha basically cell shading is not blurring the lines to create the shaded effect. This is a tutorial made that further explains what it would be used for and so on. :)

What program are you using?

Thank you. :3

Photoshop....4? >o>? 3???? merp. something like that?

And I will try cell shading. :3 Tomorrow. TuT (Spent all day today on this loooooooool)

Ah I use Paint Tool Sai to make my customs but I am sure if you used a hard round brush to shade zoomed in pretty far you should be fine. If there's one thing I have learned its that the submission process will be hell if you don't have the shading style proper. I'm still in the middle of the process of a wig!

Sweet giblets. QoQ

Well thank you for letting me know before I tried to submit. ^u^

:3 Maybe I will buy one of your pieces someday. ❤

I will go now. QuQ Test tomorrow. Must study. I will reply le moar le tomorrow. :3!

Aw that's sweet. :) Good luck! I'd love to see what you end up coming up with. ^^

I think it's cute! Once you make the changes already suggested, I think it'll be quite nice. My one personal preference would be not to have the little tuft at the top, but that's just what I would do :)

Oh. >.< Sorry. I just really like how "le" sounds. Sorry for the offense. Did not mean to mock the French. I quite like their language.

I`ll... o3o not use it in public..

And tuft = gone. Wee~

I personally thought the second one's shading looked better since it's not blurred. Overall i think it's a huge improvement though!

I have the second one still. :3 I thought the lines were too dark, but it seems that is how some wigs are? o3o?

Any suggestions with the second one? Do you think it's almost ready for trying to sell? o:

Thank you for coming/helping. QuQ

I think it needs to be sharpened towards the scalp of the head and the light source needs to be addressed. It needs to appear to be coming from the top left corner. Other then that it looks cute. :)

Sharpened at scalp.

And light source.... QuQ Okie I try to see if I can do that. TuT /horrible at light source due to never shading lol/

I will ping you when I make those adjustments if I may. ❤ QwQ~

Of course. :) Feel free to ping/comment me if you want anymore feedback on the items, and yeah I know the pain! It was hard to get used to for me also XD.

-friendly hug- Thanks for understanding. TuT

Ping you later~* (Tomorrow perhaps..) :3

Sounds good to me. :) Good luck!