So yes, as the title says, I need some help correcting my uses of (specifically) semi-colons, hyphens, and commas, in an ongoing story I'm writing. I just need a second/third opinion, as I am submitting it to a website that takes high caliber works. I'm no slouch to writing and editing, but apparently I could use another proofreader.

aaaand....here's the catch; It's a fanfic.

Oh? Still here? Well, it involves colorful ponies. .... Yes. I am extremely aware how strange this probably sounds....or not, to some.

I never thought in a million years I'd be writing fanfiction, much less about MLP. How did this happen....ugh.

Anyhow. I would be more than happy to compensate you for your troubles. (i.e. Sp XD )

I'm happy to help with editing and so forth, provided the content of the fanfic isn't particularly explicit or anything like that. Let me know! :)

I write fanfiction, but I know nothing about MLP. That shouldn't be an issue if I'm just checking punctuation, though. Ping me if you still need help!