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Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
slim
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The shaping is perfect! I think the only thing is that you need to make the hair look more like individual strands if that makes any sense and possibly light the purple on the band just a bit, like a serious bit lol, no more than that.

[edit] The headband is off? Do you want it to be a bit thinner or something? What's the reference look like?

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Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
Amy
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Hmm yeah, I'll be working a bit more with the hair it does look a bit too chunky. (Okay, okay, very chunky) And I'll lighten up the colors on the band :] There is no real reference; I just think the shape of the headband looks a little off.

Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
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Hmm it looks kinda fluffy but I'm only basing that off of these pictures which kind of have a similar feel to what you've done. one two three

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Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
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The only reason the headband looks off to me is because the way it "folds" or is tied in the front doesn't seem to make any sense. x: Unless it was intended to look like it's attached by velcro? I'm having a hard time explaining what I mean. XD
Like... the way it looks right now, it kinda looks like two blunt ends meeting at the front, rather than "tying" together or forming a knot, which I'm only assuming is the intended outcome? XD

God I'm bad at words.

Otherwise, it looks nice! I really like the pattern on the scarf.

Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
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My idea was more like the second and third ones but Art is totally right; I didnt finish drawing the folds! Woops 8D

Oh no I totally get what you mean; I can't believe I didn't even realize that until now! Haha oh man no wonder I thought it was off I never finished the foldings/ties! But thank you!

Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
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No problem! I remember working on a CI for something that required a similar tie and I had to reference pictures of different knots to get it to look right. XD

Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
slim
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Ahhh well I missed it too so don't beat yourself up lol

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Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
Amy
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Haha I blame it on looking at the drawings for too long; I miss so many details others can see xD

Lol! Well we can be unobservant together<3 8D

Mar 21, 2012 14 years ago
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I love it so far 8D The pattern on the scarf is so cute.


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