I think this belongs in the Custom Wearables Discussion forum?

It's a cute idea although I'm not sure how they would feel about one of their own items being turned into a wearable. You might want to open a ticket and see if you have to make the four major changes to it or not.

Otherwise it's a cute idea. The way you have the dragon wrapped around the HA with it layering both behind and in front of the body is going to cause some major layering issues. You'll have to choose if you want the dragon to sit over the HA or behind, not both. I think the best way to go about this would be to layer the dragon behind the HA, make the overlay smaller overall, move the head so that it's not layering over the HA, instead resting in space without touching the HA, and do the same with the tail. Perhaps with the tail just make it so that it wraps in front of the HA without touching it.

I agree that it needs to be cleaned up a quite a bit. The lineart will need to be adjusted so that it's smooth and perhaps a little sharper. As it is now it varies a lot in thickness throughout the overlay and looks a little on the softer side. That goes for the overlay and the item image.

I don't see a lot of shading so I'm going to suggest that you use darker colors to shade. Before you submit make sure that you can visibly see at least 3 layers of shading since that's the minimum, and make sure that your light source is coming from the upper left corner.

Cute idea. I hope you continue with it and do the necessary fixes. Good luck :)

Celestialangel is right. They won't let you make this, since it's an onsite thing, and is a minion as well. Ummm. It's somewhere in the rules, I know I read it. P:

Edit: You may not replicate, duplicate, heavily reference or edit any existing items on site.

Perhaps if you made the four changes and treated it like that, but I don't know. P: I would probably make a ticket to ask.

Thank you both. I suppose I just wasted my time here then haha. I suppose I will just stick to art and leave custom wears alone since I am stupid and obviously know nothing about it. facepalm I appreciate the comments though.