I've been wanting to try my hands at a CW for ages now but haven't due to irl stuff, but recently decided that I really really wanted to see a wig like this onsite. I can't afford to commission one, so here I am. Previous; 1 2 Current; / Fixed some of the lines on the right between the 2nd and 3rd version, and started some item images. Sweet Black Coffee Bob or Sweet Black Bob would be the name, depending on the item image used. Any and all critique would be wonderful!

this is supa cute! i like the colouring cant wait for progress I just feel as if the shape might be a bit unattractive

Anything specific about the shape, like parts of it? It's easier for me to fix it if I have a clear idea of what needs to be changed. c:

GOD this is just adorable to me. o: I think everything is pretty much great except I guess what throws me off a bit is how tall it is on the head up top? If that makes sense. Perhaps if a little bit of volume/roundness was taken away there, and the part dipped down just a tad more to make it more noticeable would make it better? I wish I could explain things better lol! I look forward to seeing how this turns out! ❤️

Hi hunnibunch! :D I love the concept of this wig. I love short bobs. I do agree with Barbie regarding the 'height' of the top part of the wig. It seems as though there is too much there.

Maybe something closer to this-ish?

Sorry, I don't mean to insult you by hacking up your wig with my terrible drawing. >.< But, let me know if that makes sense to you? Where i drew the black lines (over top of it) is also where i felt some layering detail would look good also to give it some depth... Sorry I don't know terms. I am no artist! xP

Makes total sense, now that you've pointed it out! I'll see what I can do about it. c: And no worries Celtic, any sort of redlines are much appreciated since it makes it easier for me to visualize. Thanks so much! Here's the edited version, plus slightly better coloring;

I think that's adorable! ^_^ I'd love a cutsie wig like that one. And, ok, I just didn't know how else to show what I meant. :3 Glad I could help a little!

UPDATE; Fixed the lines on the right a bit and started some item images. Feedback would be lovely! / Sweet Black Coffee Bob or Sweet Black Bob would be the name, depending on the item image used.

Still adorable! ^_^ And I absolutely think you should add the word 'coffee' in there somehow (I like 'Sweet Black Coffee Bob'), because that coffee CI is just too cute!

Also... I'd be really curious to see it in a blonde or platinum recolour too! ...if you had recolours in mind that is. I love me some blondies. :3

I considered it, but it would really depend on how much interest this garnered. So far not a lot of people seem interested, so if anything this will be a one batch item that I'll have to put through myself. I might dabble with other colors though first to see if I like them better than black, though.

Everyone's too caught up in Masquerade right now. Once the weather gets warmer.. and Vesnali is here there may be more interest for cute short bobs... know what I mean? ^_^

thats amazing c: I CANT CRITIQUE IT i like the 2nd ci haha

Holy shit, your HA so far is FAB. Can't wait to see the rest! :D

eheh thanks I WAS GOING TO GIVE UP thank you very much im admiring a few of yours on sf ( which I always forget to go on lol)

Don't doooo it. It's so purdy so far. :D It needs pretty blush and curly hair salon hair.. like Lilly, or something. :3

And, oh, thank you! ADMIRE WITH YOUR MOUSE! click click

..haha. so sorry, I'm tired. xP

That's true! I was aiming to put this through for my birthday though, so idk if I'll have the patience to wait til Vesnali. :b

Thank you! I'm personally leaning towards the 2nd ci too, for some reason. Loving the colors of your HA so far, btw! Those wings are gorgeous.

The wig is cute, but the shading looks a little pixellated to me. I am not an artist, so I have no idea how to help you out with that, though.

I'll take a look at that tomorrow and see what I can do about it, thank you! Just to clarify, it's the coloring, not the lines that looks pixelated?

Actually, it looks like it might be the highlights! I think there's also a CW Critique thread somewhere, where people will help you if you want it!

http://subeta.net/forums/view/875769 if you needed it btw im not sure if Im right but the ci colour of hair is lighter than the actual and they should match c: