Hi guys! Here I am working on a unicorn wearable. Just tell me what you guys think. Of course these are not finished yet. The lineart still needs to be a bit clearer, etc... And obviously this isn't colored yet. And yes, the shading on the cheek look horrible but I'll fix that soon.

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/GsSGO.png[/IMG]

Yeah, that cheek looks weird... It looks way too big or something. Makes the head look almost like a donkey :x Otherwise the body looks very nice ^^

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing. Now it looks more like a draft horse in stead of a unicorn. :p So I'll try to make the head a bit smaller and fix the cheek.

, I am really happy you made a Unicorn that is standing the way it is and that is more large in size. I wanted one that would be larger and really show. The only area that looks slightly off is the eye/cheek area. The eye looks to small for that size of cheek. But I love the way it is looking and I would definitely love a slot.

i would be really interested in one... but the cheek... it looks like you mixed a goat and a donkey XD :D

will there be more then one colour or is it just singel colour???

Already working on fixing the cheek as we speak. And I don't know... What colors do you suggest?

Yay unicorn! Hope I'm around when these are released. I rather like the stockier build of this guy, makes it not quite your typical unicorn. The only thing I'd like to add would be longer feathering on the hooves, but that's just personal preference so heh,

I really like it - I'd be interested when it's done. c:

So far I'm liking this, just the same old things as everyone else, the cheek and what not. But you know it is okay if it did magically turn into a donkey, aren't unicorns suppose to be magical?

I like the over all proportion of it compared to the HA. I am with everyone else on the cheek being a bit off, but overall, I'd definitely buy one.

I honestly don't think it's the cheek, but more the position of the eye that is off. I'm sure that it'd look better if you place the eye a bit lower, and maybe make it a bit bigger (like this). That said, I really like how you kept the original traits of the unicorns, like the goat's tail!

Yay! A Unicorn! Lovely! Can't wait to see the completed version! Definitely interested!! :D

I love it but I think it could be a bit more delicate. Thinner legs, furred fetlocks, more delicate head and longer mane. This is supposed to be the most elegant and pure creature of myth. Think something more like this:

http://dolphy.deviantart.com/art/The-Last-Unicorn-112750755

http://www.horsewallpapers.in/wallpaper/white-unicorn/

The top one of: http://shrinkychick.blogspot.com/2012/02/myth-or-legit.html

I absolutely want a slot, but only if it's more like these. I love your work, and think it's beautiful, which is why I know you can do this haha I think also that you could do two kinds: a pure, delicate white one, and a heavier, smokey black dangerous kind of one? Just an idea :D

I know what you mean. And I'll probably make the manes and leg feathering more elegant. But I'm keeping the stockier body. That's just personal. I don't like delicate unicorns. :P

Yay! A unicorn! =D

It looks more like a donkey. I think the head is too big.

I can't wait to see this when done :)

In addition to the head/cheek/eye stuffs, I'm looking at the rump. Perhaps rounded off more? It looks like the back is flat all the way back then has a sharp angle downward.

Edit: I also like the coldblood heavy look so I think I agree more "magical" feathering and mane would be pretty :)

Dang I'm gonna edit again and say maybe a slight bend to give the (from our angle right) But his front left leg a knee.

I say everything gently, I am not a artist <3

And as the artist, you have every right to do so :) As I said, your work is amazing and I can't wait to see how it turns out!