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Mar 28, 2012 14 years ago
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I made two new CWs, but I don't know if they are good and if anyone would be interested in them. So, if you have any suggestions for me or if you are interested, please tell me.

The first one ist this: The color is only an example, it could be changed to any color. Tell me in what colors you would like to see it.

And this is the second one: Please tell me which version you like better.

And yes, I want to reopen my shop very soon. ^_^

Mar 28, 2012 14 years ago
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i LOVE them both! ^ ^ the vest id love to see it in black, green, purple, darker blue and grey as well as white, really you have so many options for this wearable

im glad to see you want to reopen your shop =D i do so love your wearables

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Mar 28, 2012 14 years ago
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I like the spikiness of the cloak for sure. I wouldn't pay 600 csc for a vest.

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Mar 28, 2012 14 years ago
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The vest isn't something I would buy, but it is lovely and I think totally good enough and probably will get enough interest.

I love the cape, and I already want to play around with it and my skeleton zombie base. So I would buy that one :3



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Mar 28, 2012 14 years ago
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LordAdderhead

the cloak is lovely!

Sell me these plushies please! Discounts = LOVE

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I like the cloak a lot, but I feel like the lineart is a little... blurry? Like some of the spikes could be a bit crisper? It's very cool, though. I could see people buying it.

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I see what you mean, I have to rework this anyway and play around with the shadows a bit. ^^"

Is this better?

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I really like the Idea of the Cloak, and the placement, but I gotta say, that I had trouble identifying those spikey things as raven feathers. I know, its kinda hard with dark things to shade and light them to have the structure of feathers, but if I havent known that these were supposed to be raven feathers, I just though about spikes, and not feathers at all. I know its alot of work, and I don't wanna sound mean, or miscredit the wholelot of work you're showing here, but it might help incorporating more feathers, and making a few of them rounded.

Many feathers = good.

Of course any changes are up to you, and if people are happy with it the way it is, go ahead C=

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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My first sketch of this cloak had way more feathers than this one, but it looked a bit strange...I liked it better with less feathers...^^" And I don't want to make excuses, but...I know that ravens don't have spikey feathers like this. xD I just thought spikey feathers look more...uhm...dangerous... But you are right, I have to work on the shading, they really don't look much like featers.

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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Okay, if you already tried another version, it's natural to go for the better looking version xD I have this problem sometimes too, that things that intended to look this or that way, just won't work out and I go back to another idea XD (Like my signature pic. I wanted a running pose, but most ended up with the leg vanishing mostly behind the body and it looked stupid, even though it was anatomical right... mostly xD)

I look forward to the finished version of the cloak.

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I tried to make the feathers look more like feathers and also added a kind of...fluff... What do you think? Both versions are new. But it still is not finished I think...

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I think both versions look better than the previous, but I actually really prefer the fluffier version. The main Problem might be that the HA doesn't have a defined light source, cause that really helps with those dark glossy feathers.

I really like how it looks so far though C=

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
RyuTheShadow
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It has! The light source is somwhere in the upper left corner, but somehow this cloak doesn't want to look like the light source was there...

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I was generally speaking, that most HA Items are rather subtle shaded, since the HA can have different BGs.

Well for the feathers, use a lighter bluishblack tone maybe?

I know why I never draw digital ravens XD

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I did, once, and this was the outcome But yes, this light source thing is a problem...not every item seems to have the same light source, but the keep telling is it was the upper left corner.

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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Much! The lineart is a lot crisper now. :D

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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Derek Hale

I love the cloak - the second "fluffier" version is more to my liking. Also - super glad to see you back! The is one of my favorite CWs - I actually know several people who keep trying to buy it from me but I can't give it up :p

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Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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I'm glad to hear that you like it. xD But you can tell these people that I am going so sell one last batch of the raven and two other items in...a few minutes. After this there will be no more batches, never.

Mar 29, 2012 14 years ago
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Derek Hale

Thank you for the heads up! I'll go let them know :)

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