i never did a CW so far, and i'm not really sure my skills are enough to pull one off

but i've been doing some lineart today its really just the lines so far please dont be too hard on me ^_^;

i wanted to see if its any good at all before going into detailing/coloring

its going to be a foreground and a background item to be used alone or together

[IMG]http://i1060.photobucket.com/albums/t444/HakuyaHana/subeta/2.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1060.photobucket.com/albums/t444/HakuyaHana/subeta/1.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1060.photobucket.com/albums/t444/HakuyaHana/subeta/4.png[/IMG]

glad about every critique and thoughts i can get :)