Repost from previous times, seeing as my original interest thread was moved to discussion for now. :) If you want to give critique or other thoughts, go here!

So, uh. This is my first time making a Custom Wearable, so I have little idea what I'm doing! But I haven't seen any wearable chimeras yet, much less Japanese chimeras (also known as a nue), so I made a little something.

Nightmarish Claw Talisman This tooth came from the jaw of an ancient monster that spread nightmares and terror in its wake. It's said in legend that it was shot down by a bow and arrow -- but others claim that it still lives today, tamed by the hand of the white lotus saint. Either way, maybe you shouldn't keep this, as an awful fear grips you when you touch it, and a high-pitched laugh echoes through your mind.. (Current version. The below picture is just a sample of what it'll generally look like overlaid on an avatar.)

If it gets rejected after my initial slots, I'll keep tweaking it and fixing it up until it gets accepted.

Along with that, the slots for the first batch are open for 600CSC each. Please pay within 72 hours of being charged, thank you. :) This may or may not go into the CW area of the Cash Shop. We'll see!

3. Boss (x2)

May I have 2 slots please :)

Totally. Thank you! ❤

i have no idea how i feel about this?! its awesome and sweet but creepy and weird great work

Well, I'm glad that I about pulled off the idea, then, as that's what I was aiming for! :'D

it looks nice =) i wish i had some better critique to give you, but i think it might need a good bit of work before it'll get accepted =/ as is, i dont think its quite up to site quality =)

good luck selling and getting it accepted! <3

This is my slot-claiming/shop thread. If you want to give critique, please go to the discussion thread I have set up for it, linked in the original post, and if you're going to give critique in the first place, please tell me something specific besides "it's not up to site quality"? Shading, outlines, etc? Sorry, I'm looking for critique beyond that, and I want to keep my threads organized.

@ Marine sorry hun, my heads a bit out of it, i'm tired x: if i could figure out how to tell you to fix it, i would have, but i can't place my finger on the issue. perhaps it was a resizing problem but idk. -shrugs- again, i'm tired, i'm just trying to give you a heads up as i've seen a lot of CW's look like/similar to yours and get denied again and again. again, GL. [edit] i'm shit with critiques, so i'm sorry, but i've showed your CW to a few friends, they might be able to lend a bit of advice. -shrugs again- my brain is seriously fried and i can't focus worth a shit this weekend. SERIOUSLY SORRY -apologizes 3802147267 times-

Either way, thanks for your assistance by telling them for advice and the like~ c: (Sorry about the late reply, I sort of spaced out. xD)

haha its alright, i do that far too frequently for my taste as well.

Updated again for the billionth time, new item image and shading + lineart updated. Still taking slots, come on guys, please~?