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May 9, 2012 13 years ago
Rayrayfunray
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So i've never really done this before (<-LIE: I've tryed many times, but im never successful.) ANYWAY. So yeah... is it any good? Any Problems, Comments, Interest, Cries of horror and disbelief?

I hope i can ping this : If any wear there would take a look, id appreciate you all.

PING ME?

...also... i'm a totally LoL nerd, excuse that. and if you play... you probably don't want my name i really suck at the game. like REALLY, a lot. but i'm in love with Kat. <3

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Avarice
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KnightArmageddon

umm good luck with getting slots Kat isnt one of my fav champs, so i think i would pass but almost anyother champ you do i probably would have to be in for

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Tartelette
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I think the most important thing I can say is that I don't think they'll accept it because the belt and the swords could logically be separate items. They seem pretty strict about that. :/ Otherwise, you're off to a good start but the lineart does seem a little pixelated in some places, and a little blurry in others. The shading is shaping up, but remember that on subeta you need to have the light coming from the top left of the drawing (so on the sword on our left, the highlight should be on the top of the sword blade, not the bottom.) The sword on our right side is also being held in the HA's hand in an awkward way - try to I imagine how the sword would be pointed and where the handle would be held in your own hand for a better idea of how it should go.

But I think you're off to a good start, you just need to keep at it!

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Rayrayfunray
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cool, i might do some others, if you want too join my personal ping group . (i know it has no members...:P) please feel free and if i ever make any thing for anyone else, you'll be sure to hear about it. and if there's enough interest in LoL CWs maybe one day ill make them there own ping group!

thank you for the advice. ill keep working on it! if i try to fix it, would you mind if i pinged you to take another look?

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Avarice
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KnightArmageddon

first member!

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Rayrayfunray
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: Wooohooo!! big step in my Subeta life <3 <3

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Tartelette
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Sure! Just give me a ping and I will be happy to help if I can. :)

May 13, 2012 13 years ago
five_507
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The belt's lineart is much finer that the swords' lineart - if you want it to match, you also have to think of matching drawing technique. Also think about how small the item will appear later - I think the "S" won't be seen anymore, already now it is difficult to see. Also I think that Tartelette is right - those are different items, so it won't probably get accepted as one. About the swords... maybe you should do a little research if there are already similar swords on Subeta. If yes, a) those will probably be more difficult to submit and b) you could concentrate on the belt instead and make it perfect. Is this a tribute to something?

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