Broken By: Remera Scribe

B is for bashing your head in with a bat. R is for ridicule when you fall flat. O is for opening doors just to slam them in your face. K is for killing you without leaving a trace. E is for even the cruelest must die. N is for no more tears left to cry.

Let me know what you think. The rest of my poetry and stories are here: http://www.fictionpress.com/u/601067/

Good set up- the flow of the 'O' line doesn't quite sit right with me though... over all, good peice!