you think I did it well?

Edit: Adding two more edit. :P

Hon, you did an amazing job! :D ❤️ ❤️

It's really good!

I think this thread belongs in the Art Discussion forum, though.

Moving this to art discussion :)

sorry. heheh o.o' I was asking for opinions so that I could sell them later too.

The colours you picked don't go together really well. Reading up on some colour theory or asking for help on possible pallets might help your future projects.

for the other two my sister wanted. Achelus is mine and dude, people choose their colors not me. And next time, don't insult my sister's color choose. your the only person who hated the colors together

geeze, . calm down. you ASKED what people thought of your overlay and answered. She was not rude about it, and she gave you a suggestion. She also never said she HATED the colors. she just does not think they go well together.

personally, i think these look a little pixel-y. i think it is probably the format you saved it in, when you save and image in jpeg the lines get pixel-y. unless you edited in paint, and then its because the program is just pixels.

They're ok for just editing colors. Though they could use a bit of work. The first one's shading is really, really off. This isn't a bad thing, this is probably just a lack of experience. Sure, all your shades are pink, but you're varying too greatly for a cell-shading style. Unless you're shading isn't monochromatic, which you're wanting here, you want to use the same basic shade. Right now you're going from a super pale baby pink, to hot pink, to a desaturated salmon, to a more yellow-y pink. If you'd just leveled out those values it would have been much better.

The other two are better shading wise, I'm guessing you just put an overlay or color balance layer on. But the spots on the chibi ontre are a tad pixeled. I agree with carocake, always save in .png or .gif, JPEGs are always going to be grainy unless you save them at a ridiculously high quality.

Personally, I think she did an awesome job for the amount of work she put into it. Who cares about HOW they look, go with how WELL they are done, and they look pretty awesome to me 8D I love the Montre! ^_^ I will agree with the above note about the shading. Practice makes perfect =] Try playing around with the opacity and see what you think is more natural! I personally hate negative comments, but we need them to get better, right? I guess its all just in the way its said!

Keep up the good work, and I might commission you sometime ^^

I think the montre is a little too "spotty", maybe try blending the colors more next time? Also, you forgot to recolor the little bit on the charlies right hind leg, just above the blue mark. I also agree about the pixel-ly comments above. Save in a different format and you can usually pretty clearly see the difference. Overall, I think it's a good overlay.