Okay before you read this please know I have never written poems in English (not a native speaker) so please don't be brutal but yeah still be honest! xD I'll be most thankful for any constructive criticism!:D

Oh yeah and this poem is for my pet Shuria.

Always wrong and never right! What can I do to make me them alike! Lock the feelings deep within, let no one ever in. Make your heart as cold as ice, and never think about it twice. Make it hard as steel so you will never have to feel.

Don that mask and wear it proud. Let them hear it clear and loud. I will make you fear and suffer you all made me so much tougher. Fear my wrath I have chosen my path!

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I like the idea and words within your poem, though it might be stronger if you make the meter more universal. When i say meter it means the beats to the line.

al-ways wrong and nev-er right (7 beats) What can I do to make me them a-like!(10 beats, also, fixing needed) lock the feel-lings deep with-in (7 beats) let no one ev-er in (6 beats) make your heart as cold as ice (7 beats) and nev-er think a-bout it twice.(8 beats) Make it hard as steel (5 beats) so you will nev-er have to feel. (8 beats)

Don that mask and wear it proud.(7 beats) Let them hear it clear and loud.(7 beats) I will make you fear and suff-er(8 beats) you all made me so much tough-er.(8 beats) Fear my wrath(3 beats) I have cho-sen my path!(6 beats)

Do you see what I mean? The seven beat lines seem to be the most used, so your best bet is to try to get the other lines on a seven beat meter too. The thing about poems is that you don't have to use complete sentences. Let me try to rewrite this (hopefully as you meant your poem to say)

Never right and always wrong (7 beats) Always feel, never belong (7 beats) Lock your feelings deep within (7 beats) No one may ever come in (7 beats) Make your heart as cold as ice (7 beats) Never think about it twice. (7 beats) Make your heart as hard as steel (7 beats) So you never have to feel. (7 beats)

Don that mask and wear it proud.(7 beats) Let them hear it clear and loud.(7 beats) You feel the pain and suffer (7 beats) I stand before you tougher.(7 beats) Tremble before, fear my wrath (7 beats) I have selected my path! (7 beats)