I'm not familiar with Fairy Tale, but I think it looks cute so far. I know they'll probably make you remove the belt from the pants and make it a separate item, also they won't let you have Summer Time in the names for all of the items. :P Other than that I think the clothing is precious! :)

All good not a lot of people are familiar with fairy tail XD Ahh, see I will have to change the names this is just idea's anyway I didn't like the summer time theme through all of them. I figured the belt and pants would have to be two different items Which is fine, if people are interested XD

Thank you!! <3

I think the art is pretty good. But it looks like you used soft shading. Subeta style uses cel shading, so maybe you should fix that before getting thm approved. The sandals could also use some more shading, if they have any, as well as the band on the wig. Hope that helps :)

Thank you very much for the help! I am so used to soft shading that I just do it XD Hopefully these are a little better! ^.^

Anyone care to critique the newest version? :)

I don't think they'll let you make the swimsuit and the shirt a single item, unfortunately.

Yeah I was told for the same for the belt XD I will probably work on a bottom for the Bikini if anyone would want it. :( As for the belt I think it would just be lost because I don't think anyone would want to pay 600CSC just for a belt! XD Boo well I will have to try at least.

maybe if you add belt loops connected to the pants, it'd make it one item - if you couldn't create the same effect with layering two items, they won't make you separate them.

Hmm thank you for the help! I will add some loops around the belt make it one. As for the Bikini I just think I will make a bottom just if they say no on it being two.

Other than that how do the items look? Think they would be acceptable?

! maybe for the bikini, you could do something similar - that is, try to create an effect where part of the bikini is under the top and part of it is over, like, for instance, a bow in the center of the bikini top that sticks out of the shirt or something. Just make sure it's incorporated enough to merit being one complete item.

I think the shading on the wig is a bit bright and doesn't really follow the light source shadingredients, so I would try to add some shadows.

I love the top and the pants..I like the older version hair for the headband, but the colours are really nice.