Ok so I was making a kyubey tribute but apparently it is too similar. It was surprising considering how I've seen some tributes with much more similarities that mine but ok. Also Idk if I should be repinging all of the slotted people? ;A; this is the first time im making a CW and im scared weh

Kyubey: [IMG]http://images.puella-magi.net/thumb/4/48/Kyuubey_Chara_Sheet.jpg/300px-Kyuubey_Chara_Sheet.jpg?20110119212813[/IMG] Original: [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/lGHoR.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ROIEa.png[/IMG]

I was told

• The cat/pointed face does not count as a change
• Marking changes to the ears (the dots to diamond) don't not count either.
• Also a small note of the shading but mainly the reference situation.

Reworked: [IMG]http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s21/nightpoppy/kyubeyitem3-1.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s21/nightpoppy/kyubeywearpre2.png[/IMG]

• Shortened the ears (although I don't think this is that different...)
• More pink gradient on the ears as well as gave him socks
• Fluffier fur for face and tail instead
• Removed the curved/jagged ends of the ears and gave him more bunny ones I guess??
• More angelic in colour?? ie more purple???
• I guess I rounded the cat ear tips a bit but its small too

And then another change? Idk doing a few to see what looks best OTL [IMG]http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s21/nightpoppy/kyubeyitem4.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s21/nightpoppy/kyubeywearpre3.png[/IMG]

Maybe add like...some kind of marking on the tail or something? Make the tip of the tail a different colour, sort of like a fox's in a way? Not sure, it looks pretty different from the original imo. :'I

: thanks! pink to the tip of the tail would be good :] yea i know @@ i thought so as well but i feel they are being really picky lately :T [edit] alright so i submitted it again and now its not the tribute side that gets it denied but the shading... Item: Thin, weak lineart, shading too faint, Not enough eras shaded/too much left flat. The item is a bit minimally shaded around the face. Overlay: Pillow shading. The chest and tail on the overlay are a bit pillow shaded. The overlay should be shaded with a light source to the top left. Old: (oops i copied the wrong link)

New:

any better? :T

- hmmmm

It is. I'd advise to make some more contrast on face. Other than that, I guess it pass.

It's a really cute item, I hope you succeed. :)

[edit] I found a raffle ticket, thank you! :)

: hmm ok thank you! and gratz xD

I just wanted to go and complain about how the golden band isn't nice and shiny anymore but I see you've changed it back :) The wings and tail are also much nicer and better shaded. Could you list the four changes you've made for now?

: thanks :] thought id just reshade the whole lot basically instead of changing parts of it @@ I told them:

• Angelic potion colour scheme. Wings + collar added. Rings around ears removed.
• Larger pink gradient on ears. Also socks on legs and tip of tail.
• Bumpy/jagged end of the long ears removed to be more bunny like. Cat ear set (top) more rounded than pointy.
• Fluffy tail, face.

Hm... I think it could actually go through this time. I think the overall look just went farther from the original, even if you didn't really do big changes, but Pokémon are always flat and very simply shaded, and yours is now quite detailed. Okay I just read your last picture post and forget it xD And yes, I do think that the new shading will go through, too. I find it quite beautiful.

:haha kyubey isnt a pokemon if thats what you meant there |DD oh haha its alright :P thank you though! ^^ hopefully arghh i really dont want to fuss over again OTL

I know I'm not listed for this but it is so cuutee XD And I love the new shading on the tail, too! They mentioned the chest being shaded in a way that didn't really show the light source, so idk make it a little darker near the right ear? :x (our right)

I'm not the best for critique ahaha n_n but if you need more help besides the cwcritique group, try posting your artwork here! ^_^

Argh. ... OKAY YOU CAUGHT ME I SUSPECTED IT TO BE ONE BUT I WAS WRONG you must admit though that with its looks it could easily be one :D

+-+ cuuuute will you do recolors like a blue or green?

: oh thnak you! but unfortunately i already resubmitted it ;A; if they say its still bad I guess ill go and change that part too OTL oh and ill be sure check that out! : haha xDD i guess so xP : haha im not sure! someone suggested a demonic one though which i might do :O!

Ahh that's not a problem hehe xD Fingers crossed it'll go through this time! and don't forget to set the right batch cap omg

: haha yea ;u; lowered the batch number from 4 to 3 this time uwua i wish there was a preview page with all your options layed out before you confirm =A=