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This is very obviously a wip, and nowhere near submitting quality, but thoughts? What do I need to do to improve? Do you think anyone might have interest in a finished, better version?

I think the hair edges look pretty odd since some are kind of un-pointy, keep in mind hair is pretty sharp! Also, you should add some internal lines. Many wears have been denied because of the 'sticker effect'. Just quoting some stuff I've been told because I'm not nearly cool enough to say things like that :p

Thanks very much, I'll see if I can fix those. :)