i love the outfit but for some reason i feel like something is missing, and i'd like some critique and suggestions.

please don't forget to ping me!

How about ? They're black, but not too overwelmingly dark? They could possibly also be combined with something burgundy, though I can't really think of anything right now...

thank you c: i used your suggestion but i never thanked you, sorry! but i changed the HA i want critique on, if you'd like to help me out with this one as well!

No problem :) I love the colour combo on your current one! Maybe add a little something black around the waist? Like shorts, or a low belt?

i took your advice and i think it looks much better c: thank you!