I am okay if you give me brutal criticism. I just want to know what you guys think. I have not been on the site in awhile, and I want to know if my Ha looks alright. I will take any suggestions under consideration. And who knows, there might be a prize for the best suggestion and possible rate backs.

Remember people, brutal and constructive. :D

It's ok, but mostly it looks like you just randomly threw pink and black items together. Ditch the sunglasses, the scarf, and the swirly pink flower background and it's a decent start. (If you do ditch those, you can ping me and I'll come give more suggestions, it's just hard for me to see past those things.)

6/10

Throwing in my two cents. :)

The number of items and the swirly background gives an impression of speed and energy that I can get behind. My biggest beef is with the geisha face, which does not match with the "hip youngster" look of the items.

I also agree a bit with Zabrie above. When you choose items, try to think about what kind of setting they seem to belong in. The scarf is quite fine, the leg warmers much more casual, the background is flowery, but your outfit is punky. What kind of impression are you after?