
There's a typo with "catpturing"/"capturing" as well as a capitalization after the second instance of the random item's name, in "[...] But the comatose [...]"
I don't think there's a way to deal with the a/an grammar problem when it comes to items that start with a vowel.
Could put "a(n)" to fix the "a/an" problem. Not a great solution, but it works.
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