I had it commissioned, but I just want to make sure everything looks ok, if there was anything you guys would change, and if they story makes sense before I turn on the nominate button lol. Thanks.

EDIT:

linking the pet helps DUH.

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I like it! The medals are a bit small, but other than that its really nice!

You may want to make it a bit smaller. Here is how it looks on a 1024x768 resolution ^^

Hmmm. Weird. It it just a teeny bit big for mine. I'll see if that's possible. Thanks.

I would suggest trying to squish the left column with your pet tighter so that all of the profile fits on the screen :)