The wip looks pretty good so far.
The only things that bother me are the eyebrows and the forehead. Eyebrows should be the mirror image of each other, so the left eyebrow's arch should more to the right. Or the right eyebrow's arch should be more to the left, it really depends on what expression you want to have.
The left side of the forehead should be covered by more hair. Am I allowed to redline?
I really like her face otherwise. The eyes are very pretty.