I sat there crouched in the cold. My skin felt clammy and damp. Darkness was all around me. Everything was just a large black mass. I wished my eyes would adjust quickly. The floor was slick with water. I could hear water droplets hitting the ground, as well as my breathing which was coming out in short, wheezy rasps. That was all I heard, all I saw, all I felt. Once I had control over my air intake, I tried to stand. My legs were weak and achy. My thighs burned with pain as I lifted myself up. I stumbled around in the gloomy cave until I found a wall. My hands glided over it for a moment before I pulled back. They were dripping wet. Everything seemed to be wet…to be cold, and dark, and miserable. I suddenly felt a sharp stab at my legs again, the collapsed on the damp earth. I curled up into a fetal position and started to sob. I was confused, lost in a place so unfamiliar it hurt. The sting of my lower body was torture, I silently prayed for it to end.

          I'm not sure where I was going with this really...just a sudden attack of inspiration, and boom! My question is, in your opinion, whether to continue or just call it a descriptive paragraph. Also, I have no ideas for a plotline. If you have a suggestion, please comment. =P Thanks. ^^

I think you should go with it. It's awesome. My one suggestion on the paragraph is to split the paragraph at one point. Where it sais: I stumbled around in the gloomy cave until I found a wall. I think that should be the start of a new paragraph, just my opinion.

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As for a plot suggestion, I think you should have her/him, like, in a research lab, or trapped in a dungeon, and they medicated her ,that's why her legs hurt and everything's blurry.

It's good. I thought it was a little too...overbearing? With the descriptions. I don't know, don't listen to me. The first thing I thought, though, was OMG RAPE D: What with the lower body stuff. Good work, continue if you want.