Hey everyone, I'm pretty new to Subeta but I'm having a lot of fun playing with the human avatars. So far I have thrown this together but I'm not sure if this is a cliché look or if I did it well (yes, I am a male dressed in female clothing- I like it that way). Also I'm not very familiar to the items just yet, so if you have any suggestions I would love to look into them.

(any price range is fine; it can give me something to work up to)

Edit: -Removed wings -Removed back bow -Added some colour (pink) -Changed loli sleeves, empire ribbon, belt

For a newbie HA, (human avatar), you did pretty great compared to the others! I'll point out the good and the bad for you ^_^ Good; -The Layering . -Not Cluttered .

Bad; -Overused Color scheme (White/Black/Gray) . -Those wings . -It seems like its missing a white shirt, (under the corset and below the choker)

Other then that, its great !

Thank you very much for your input! Your suggestions are very helpful. I took off the wings and I shall look for a shirt or something to go under the corset and see how that works out.

looks very nice for a new user. kudos. my only suggestions are to remove the head bow and the back bow (it clutters the areas it covers because they're both too similar to the underlying color) and to add one other color in there as a few accents. something like along with , and . or something like that just to add some pizazz to an overdone scheme. ^_^

Hmm, that may just work. I tried pink (gawd, I'm such a girl, eh?). I'm not sure if it works though. Let me know what you think!

I think the pink would look alright, if they were the same shade. the lolita sleeves are a bit bulky, i'd get rid of them. and the belt, and use the pink empire ribbon.

Wow, for a newbie, it looks amazing. I would say take out the pink belt, it doesn't match the other pinks. Also the hot pink part of the sleeves don't match. I'm guessing that the lighter pink looks best with the gray. The sleeves are a bit bulky; covering up some parts of your HA. Then try adding a bit more things; try experimenting.

Wow, you guys are my heros! I'm a bit too attached to the sleeves (I love my frills) but I'll change them back to white. It looks better this way.

I think with how detailed your HA is, something as simple as a White Paintbrush would do you justice. Personally though, unless my HA is cosplaying (to a degree), I don't really like the use of backgrounds.

Hmmm, you have a good point. I'll look into that item and see what comes out of it.