Any idea to what I could add to make this avatar ANY better?

First off, I love the black and white of your HA. It's probably my favourite colour scheme to work with :D

I think one thing that would help would probably be to remove the umbrella, that way a person can see more of your HA :) Also, since you seem to like stripes, why not try, instead of having them everywhere, you instead just imply that they're there? Example being your legs: why not, since you're using the white lace-up sandals, wear blac pants/leggins, because then the criss crossing of the sandals will give the impression of stripes on your legs. Another item that can suggest stripes is the immortal eternal assassin belts that go on your arms. You could do a white jacket with those over top?

Also maybe, if anything, just tone down the amount of pattern? Just because imo, too much pattern makes everything blend together. But in all honesty... I probably have no idea what I'm talking about x) I just do whatever to my HA's.

Thanks. I'll try that. I'm kinda on a budget, I can't even afford the Belts. In fact, I had to sell mine to actually have some money. XD; But I will keep that in mind.

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Woah. Cross that out. When i sold mine the price was 700k. Sure went down.

I like your HA too! its very pretty and well organized! but I personally think there needs to be some sort of small accessory in the hair...like a white heart clip? It's just your HA is very elaborate down in the outfit, but not so much in the head...It's just a thought though! ^^

Thanks I'll try that. I just don't really like the White Heart clip because of how bulky-ish it is.

You think YOU'RE too plain? Look at me! Anyway, love your HA. (:

Thanks. ^^ And I love your HA. :3 You actually managed to use the dress!

Maybe: or I just kinda agree that there should be a little something on the head... It is VAAAARY cute though. :)