Done.

I think your narrative is pretty good. What exactly did you need help with?

Err general writing skills, yada yada yada. Just that I can't afford anything below a 100% yet my teacher is new and incompetent (lots of bottled up frustrations here) so I guess just general writing and such.

Well, blame me for generalizing, but that's the problem with all new teachers - they're so worried about looking good at their job and think they deserve respect right off the bat. I couldn't imagine you recieivng a low grade though and hope you get your 100%.