Yeah, I haven't posted anything with my new raver outfit. So, can I get a rating? I hope she doesn't look too bad.

4/10. I'm liking the colors and the brightness but the auora necklace is standing out, and most of the items are from the same set. + your stomach is showing. >.>; I'm liking the face/ hair though. The colors really stand out there.

Edit: Try mixing more sets or individual items.

Eh.. I like the raver set... lol And yes, the stomach shows with that shirt.

And Ravers wear glow sticks.. lol

Lol I'm just critiquing your strategy and the flow of the avatar.I'm not a person who likes more than 2 items from a set at once (and usually only acessories). Just showing the high and low points for me. Whatever floats your boat.

Well, I changed a few things, as well as added a few things, hopefully that helped.

I'm not liking that necklace. It sticks out like a sore thumb, eh?Love the wig combo, but some yellow on the top half would look nice. Careful! Don't make it look cluttered, doll. Any reason for the expensive background?

'cause it's dark.. and we don't really have a rave scene? lol It wouldn't make much sense to take away the glow stick from a RAVE outfit. Don't really like a whole lot of yellow.. And I can't really add much more up top without it covering up the undershirt or the arms. I can't help the bottom, that's how the pants are made. And the body paint doesn't put anything on the chest area, which pisses me off. And the blue paint is far too dark to even show up.

So... I don't know what else to put. And don't wanna take away my glow stick. 'cause it just looks plain without it. A raver without a glow stick is like a fish without water. lol

6/10 pretty good, but it should be in a city/party setting

7/10 it's good and good colors but a little bit too complicated. i can barely focus on it.

It's not meant to be simple. O_o; It's a rave outfit.