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May 25, 2009 16 years ago
sejine
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Since I fail at HAs, this is a major accomplishment for me since I put something half-way decent (IMO) together. :P

If you feel it needs slaughtering though, go right ahead. I'm open to constructive criticism.

Jun 9, 2009 16 years ago
Amazon
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Yeah, bigger eyes would balance your look a bit more. Your eye colour might look good in a completely different shade, such as purplish, but try it. Also the shorts could be darker. Other than that, I like it- cute and simple :)

Rate mine? I will add fertile ground background when I have the sP

Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
Sarenrae
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The vine on the leg throws me off. Like others said, try bigger eyes (but not huge! that only works for overly-cute HAs, and this isn't one of them) instead of the small ones. Overall, though, it's really nice.

9/10

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Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
Sunnny
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very cute everything seems to match 8.5/10

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