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Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
RegeneRegetta
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It's based on a dream I once had, though I had very little recollection of it, the bits and pieces I do remember inspired me to write something. :D

Dance of the Angels

A semi-lit stage with a dark and lonely silence. With no one around but the Almighty Himself, And the leader of the Underworld lurking in the darkness.

Suddenly, the spotlight shone bright Signaling the beginning of a performance. A pair of angels appeared, from each side of the stage, A bit apprehensive and quite shy. With their luminous raven wings glistening, they danced as best they could, Hovering about as a hummingbird does to a flower.

However, there was someone missing. Who could it be? It was the main star of the show of course, Oh where can she be? When almost all hope was lost, she pops in At the most random of moments. 'Sorry I'm late, I had previous engagements' Was all that she said before she took her place on stage, flying in the center with her shiny baton.

The other two just smiled, knowing how she could get A bit sidetracked sometimes and they continued the show, And with not a flaw in sight, they were a huge success.

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Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
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Quote by Offthelove
Hmm.
I like it..
8/10

Thanks

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Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
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It's cute x3
lol, I know that's a weird first thought but I really do like it! There's some lines I feel that are a bit odd but I'm not 100% what changes should be made.

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Jun 10, 2009 16 years ago
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Quote by Trick-Dash
It&;s cute x3<br />
lol, I know that&;s a weird first thought but I really do like it! There&;s some lines I feel that are a bit odd but I&;m not 100% what changes should be made.

I see, I can tell there should be some changes in there somewhere as well, but I've no idea how to change tem at this moment either. ^^; Thanks for the comment :)

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