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Jun 12, 2009 16 years ago
Vapid_Schadenfreude
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Personally, I hate it. But whatever. It's only my second digital painting.

http://kabloomy.deviantart.com/art/Vagina-Hammer-125622401

Please critique harshly. The entire reason I'm on subeta is to become a better artist.

Jun 12, 2009 16 years ago
kate_174
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Zomg. I love it. The only thing I think you should do is to make the lineart less blurry, unless you were aiming for that. It is quite unique, like the rest of your art. ^_^

Jun 12, 2009 16 years ago
Vapid_Schadenfreude
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I didn't do that on purpose. Ugh, I'll fix that next time. Practice makes perfect :)

Jun 12, 2009 16 years ago
disccordion
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very unsettling! it's a fantastic second go, don't get discouraged yet, i see great things ahead. i won't say much about the digital techniques, i think it'd be more interesting for you to develop that on you own. that's true with any medium of course, but i believe there are a few standard things to do with oil paints compared to digital paint. cause there's an eraser tool on computer programs. :3

the most negative thing that stands out to me are the arms. they seem very flat compared to the rest of the piece. arms are surprisingly complicated features! i have a hard time wrapping my head around the bone structure of arms. you'll hear this over and over and over but the most beneficial thing to do is study bones and guts (eh hem, muscles i mean). and although there's a certain style to your artwork i'm sure, practicing realistic proportions is good to do before you start distorting them. the right hand is very well done though. really good job on the fingers. my most important advice is: have fun with what you do! otherwise there is little point.

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