Okay, I've had an account on subeta for... 1 year, 9 months, 1 week, 5 days I've only just been bothered to make an avatar, so here it is;

So, any ideas on what I should add/take away?

I adore her simplicity. I would swap out those sunglasses for a darker shade, like the black wrap glasses or dark shady shades

It's a he... it's kind of hard to notice due to the darkness of the top. But thanks for the comment.

I'll try the darker ones. thank you for the suggestion.

oh woops. still adore him! lol

I tired a darker shade. Personally I liked the lighter ones more. Does it look nicer?

(Sorry about the lateness, got side tracked with cooking dinner.)

Impressive for your first! Usually it seems like users go through phases before their HAs start looking more refined. :) Yours is nice and simple. :) Though the flower in your hair looks a bit navy - maybe switch it for something black like the Black Heart HairClip or add some more navy to the chest/waist.

I suggested the darker sunglasses because I think the dark would look better to even out the large amount of gray hair. (: But obviously your preference comes first. If you make an avatar, you should like looking at it. lol.