Brace yourselves... this is my first CI... get ready to feel sorry for me and kinda sneer at my horrible attempt like I always do (in my head).

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I'd love critique! 8D

Some things I've noticed already: Black outline=bad Weird shading (halp?) No details No realisticness

Thank youu!

Well right now your coloring makes it look likee the chest is balloon like, the way that the head is right under the head there would be shading. I don't really know how to explain it other than it looks balloon like as is. You also have no actual shading, just highlights.

Other than that I think tha black outline works, most items are indeed black lined. (; It's a good try for a first try!

Thanks so much! I came so close to shading it at the bottom, but for some reason I guess I forgot.

I really appreciate it! Thanks again. :3