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Jun 14, 2009 16 years ago
Epitaph
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Edit I totally spelled 'Please' wrong. Haha go me!

Alright, so I got bored today and was like 'Hey lets draw an overlay!' Thus I began to draw.

So far I am totally stoked because really, quad art is NOT my forte. However, something with the feet is bothering me. Here's the sketch (scaled down A LOT):

Could someone possibly give me a little critique? Maybe even a redline? :D I'd really really appreciate it. And Sorry for the insane orange color I used to sketch it. XD

And if any one is wondering, I drew it in Paintool SAI.

Jun 14, 2009 16 years ago
Epitaph
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Back toes more square, that's probably it actually. XD -dances off to fix- Thank you for your complement and feedback Jodie. c:

Jun 14, 2009 16 years ago
Nhyra
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If you look, the front leg on the ground and the back leg closest to the viewer are both on different planes. Maye if you change that, your Keeto will look more balanced.

And maybe thicken the neck a tad, or add some mane fluff? The head appears to be floating a bit

Jun 14, 2009 16 years ago
Epitaph
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Thank you Nhyra, I see it now that you've pointed it out. XD

Jun 15, 2009 16 years ago
Jenneth
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MY GOD THAT IS BETTER THAN SUBETA ART IN MY OPINION. *n * and you know nothing beats actual subeta art. <3

Jun 15, 2009 16 years ago
paranoia
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The pose resembles the glade keeto a lot.

But still, it looks nice! I think with some more detail it'll look amazing even if the anatomy is a little off (considering the 'official' anatomy of the keeto that is.) it looks good so far.

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