Well I was really board today and so I just drew my new fursona. He doesn't have a name but he is a chimera. So since I wasn't really focusing on anatomy much I'd like some red lines and some critiques.

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Please and thank you. (By the way I know there are some bad erased pencil marks there but ignore those. And you need to click the image three times to see the full view.)

Cool fursona ^^ I particularly like the design on the head.

I'm not much of anatomy expert, especially on hybrid creatures, but the one thing I can see is that it looks like it only has three legs! Unless you were doing it on purpose, the other back leg should be visible, even if only a little bit.

also there's something funny going on around where the chest joins his front left leg, I'm not quite sure what though... maybe the chest is too big or the leg joint goes up too far into the body?

Hope that was any help :)

Yea his other back leg was cut off just above the knee so it shouldn't be visible in that picture. And now that I look at it, you're right. I probably made the chest a bit too big. Since I was trying to think of a big cat's anatomy of how they are muscular built, so I made his chest to muscly I guess. But thanks.

Okay, I made a redline for you. :)

Here it is! ❤

Since you said that he kinda of has the anatomy of a big cat, I went with that. Your anatomy is pretty good, but the main things I would focus on would be the legs (more specifically the back ones). His right back leg should be visible because, like West said, it looks like he only has three legs! XD You should also bring the other back leg foward a little, since it looks like he's squating instead of sitting. And make his hip a little... fuller, I guess? I don't really know how to describe it. Same with the shoulder.

I would also make the back a bit bigger, too, and more arched. And for the tail, remember that it's part of the spine so it shouldn't dip down that much. For the front legs, bring his left one out farther because it makes it look much shorter compared to the other one. And one other little nit-picky thing, the toes that are higher up on the front paws are like the thumbs on a human hand and go on the inside, not the outside.

Haha, sorry if I sound stupid or something. XD This is my first critique and redline, so I hope I explained myself good enough. (And sorry that it's so long, too!) You've got a very cool fursona, by the way! :D Keep up the good work!

maybe make the black lines thicker and / or more solid? it would help bring out the colors and make the whol piece stand out better.