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Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
Nouveau
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[edit] Finished!

THANK YOU for your suggestions guys! All done.


Trying to experiment a bit now that summer's started, so I've whipped up a sketch.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/Nicoletherater/wipp.png

I would really appreciate any suggestions for color schemes/background(PLEASE HELP ME OMG) and constructive criticism on the weird top-down perspective pose/anatomy. ❤

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
SATIRE_426
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cutee! but as for the perspective, i think perhaps tucking that one leg that's out there (the right one, our left leg) might help with the inverted triangular perspective you seem to be trying to achieve. right now it looks a tad unbalanced.

edit: wtf it posted before i was done. uhm. make the neck a bit thinner and you should be ok, btw 8D it looks good so far.

as for color schemes...is she like...a navy girl?

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
ricecake
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Uh. :/ To me, she seems very, very short. Are we looking at her from the top point of view? If so, then I would say that her legs be a bit smaller. The main problem seems to be the legs, so you could work on that. Like, I think her right leg is moved too far away...

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
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I was going to say her legs look really short.

Beautiful detail though. I love the hair!

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
Nouveau
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ricecake: I feel offended by the uh + frowny face combo. Other than that, thank you for the critcism.

Satire and Mega: Both of you were really helpful. ❤ Tweaked it a bit.

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
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Great job on the details!

All else aside, your piece seems to focus on the effects of perspective. I have pointed out an effective perspective ratio below. ❤️ Hope it helps!

[IMG]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y241/n___n/ArtByMe/Works/HiKSM.png[/IMG]

Jun 20, 2009 16 years ago
ricecake
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I'm sorry that I offended you in that way. D: I'll try to be more reasonable next time~

Your anatomy is very good though. :)

Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
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I really like this... the only thing I may mention is that the fingers on the hands are the same length as the thumb... so they look a little stubby. :<

And the top-down perspective isn't very noticeable... like it wasn't done at such an extreme that is noticeable. Diginova did an excellent job of showing you what the problem is. :3

Overall very good! Loove the details and you do excellent anatomy~

Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
Lorii
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I really love the details, especially the hair, wow. o: I'm too inexperienced in perspective myself so I can't help you there. XD Good work so far. Can't wait to see this when it's completed!

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Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
Nouveau
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Thank you so much guys. ❤ I don't think I'm quite ready to go completely full blown with perspective but I've got Digi's pic saved for future reference.

I hate to be excessively demanding, but any colors/background suggestions at all? D: Struggling with the background especially.

Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
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It looks really nice, I love the hair c:
As for colour suggestions, some part of me wants dark purple or burgundy and gold, or a combination of the three, but I don't think it'll look very good ^_^; (For the outfit, I mean). And for the hair, maybe a nice blonde or a rich chestnut colour? She looks like a navy girl, so any navy like colours would work, I guess.

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Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
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Quote by KISSOFDAWN

She looks like a navy girl, so any navy like colours would work, I guess.
I thought so too. xD I was thinking more of royal or navy blue. For the outfit.

It depends on who she is. :O

Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
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KISSOFDAWN + Ricecake: Thanks for those colors, played around with what both of you said! ❤ All finished.

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
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She looks awesome. (: Very nice work!

(Especially her hair xD)

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