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Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
Santur
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I really like this avatar and I think I'll keep it for a while, but I'd like some advice/criticism on it so maybe I can improve it even more.

Constructive criticism only, please. (I don't even have to say that though, knowing you awesome people. :D)

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
EpitomeOAwkward
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Hm...I don't see much wrong with it at all! It all matches so well...

The headband doesn't look perfect on that wig, layering wise, but you can't get aroudn it, and it looks awesome anyways. The pears stand out a lot too, but it's still awesome. =D

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
Santur
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Thank you! ^^

You're certainly right about the headband, I was aware of that before, but I couldn't find anything that matched any better...I guess I'll keep looking, then. :D

And as for the pearls, those were meant to balance out the white on the horns. I've got the sleeves there now that balance the horns out very nicely, I think, so I'm not sure what to do with the pearls. I don't really want to remove them altogether, maybe I'll try layering them under something so that they don't stand out as much.

[EDIT:] Layered them under the vest, does that look better? owo

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
kurloz
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Hmm, the shoes don't match, their shade of purple/plum is different from your others, and they have gold in them which doesn't reoccur anywhere else in your HA. I like how you matched the pirate wench shirt with the horns of your wig, but the rest of the wig doesn't really match anything either, nor does the vest. You could also try spreading a little more cream towards your ankles (could be achieved by layering the grand waltz shoes under the shoes you have, you'd have those little cream tufts at your ankles). Overall, I'd give it a 7/10.

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Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
EpitomeOAwkward
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Yup, that fixed the pearls! =D

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
Santur
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Added a gold-ish necklace to balance out the boots. I plan on getting the Grand Waltz boots once I'm not broke. xD

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
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nice avatar it look perfect good job for u it 10/10 i love ur wig :)

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Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
Santur
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Thanks. :)

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