so i personally don't think i'm very good at making HA's but i want other opinions, if you could, rate it 1-10, tell me why you like it, and if there's something, wrong what could i do?

I'll give you a 6/1 You need a shirt underneath that vest.. and the mouth and eyes and hair are kinda ugly in my opinion.

alrighty any suggestions for the hair (or shirt)???

I'd change the vest to a shirt, and lose the beanie....other than that, cute.

6.5/10

5/10 change the hair, and colour :3 And put a vest under your HA's top.