Not too fond of the face make-up, quite honestly. They eyes are fine; but the red lips and pale white of the face distract a little too much.

I also recommend adding something to match the traces of dark green-ish turquoise in the head comb- the Turquoise Corset would probably work well if layered under the dress/corset/etc.

The Imperial Oriental Waist Sash would help to match the skankpop shoes as well. :)

Over all, I'd give your current avatar a 4/10. It has potential, though!

I don't much like the pale and the pink, but it is kinda cool :P The hair and outfit go together extremely well - around 8.5/10, i'd say. If you could find a good background, that'd help :)