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Jun 21, 2009 16 years ago
KALEIGH
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Skillane

I've been playing with HAs for a while, but this is really my first one I've gone all out on and tried colour matching and the like. So I'd really appreciate your thoughts or suggestions on it :D Thanks in advance!

Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
Kali_818
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Okay. I really like that you used the colors of the plant next to you, very nice choice. But maybe you want to get rid of the Mori (or Nori, dunno o.O) item on your chest. It sticks out of the skirt very unnatural. Maybe you can find a different purple item or even a green one?

I really like the hair layering, but you could need something green on the head too, I'm sure you'll find one. Maybe one of the Heart Clips or something like that.

And layer the shoes under the skirt, it'll look much better ^_^ Also you could add some black to the feet region if you want :)

Overall I really like it and for your first real attempt it's pretty good. 7/10.

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Jun 22, 2009 16 years ago
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Aerisix

nice purple and green are good together and i like as u do 2layer hair nice 9/10 :)

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Jun 23, 2009 16 years ago
KALEIGH
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Skillane

Thanks for the suggestions & rates so far everyone :) I've changed my HA around slightly based on your comments. Although right now I'm still sticking with the Mori Gown because...I don't know. For now I kinda still like it. I like the little pop of purple. But I'm still on the lookout in case something better comes along :D

Jun 28, 2009 16 years ago
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aww, it's cute, good start. I think you should lose the plant, and spread out your colors a bit more C:

Jun 28, 2009 16 years ago
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My only thing is your anklet is over your skirt and it should be under :D

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