Well. I like it. I worked hard on it, and I'm pleased with the results.
Rate? Suggestions?
(number rates, 1 being failtastic, 10 being awesomesauce)
k, go. And, if you ask, I'll rate back. :P
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8/10. it's quite good, lovely color scheme. the clip and glasses aren't the right shade of green though, but other than that, nice job!

9/10 nice job ^_^ Nice color scheme! I just redid mine >< It's addictive! haha
It's cute! I like the colour matching :) I don't normally think of brown, green, and pink looking good together, but you pulled it off wonderfully! 9/10 :D My only suggestion: replace the Citrus Charms Lime Green Sunglasses with Small Green Glasses. The shape is nicer, and the green in them is a bit softer :)
Overall, though, it's very nice ;)
The mouth freaks me out. It looks really weird together with that lipstick, I'd change it to a smaller base mouth. The scarf doesn't match and the teal in the hairclip is distracting, and your pinks don't match. The wings are unnecessary and don't match anything either. 7.5/10
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Jacobblacksgirl: You are so sweet. :) Thanks so much. ^ ^ I picked the glasses 'cause I like the shape, and the color matches the little bit of green poking out from the miniskirt. :P
SPEED : I know the teal in the middle of the flower doesn't match, but I figured it didn't matter. :P After reading how everyone hates the glasses, I have to agree that they aren't the right shade of green. But, thank you very much~
DwI: Thank you! :] I was having SOMUCH trouble with mine, then this just materialized in my wardrobe. :P
Kazego: Thank you for the compliment. ^ ^~!! And, I'm trying your suggestion. You're right about it being a softer color, but I dunno. The shape looks funny to me, with this hair. :P Don't get me wrong, I loooove these glasses. It just looks funny here, to me. xD
Stitch: I like my HA to be smiling, rather than looking like she's pursing her lips all the time. XD That's the impression I get, sometimes, when I look at the lips without the smile. But, I guess I can understand how it can be creepy, being so big. xDD I agree that the scarf doesn't match, but I figure I'd pull the creme color out for the skin, the darker brown for the darker browns in the outfit, and the olive.. well, it's supposed to compliment the green, but it IS a bit too dark. As for the teal in the clip, there's not much I can do about that. XD Besides, I like it. :P Also, the pinks don't match 100%, but they compliment each other. It's not like I'm pairing salmon with baby pink. ;] The wings are there because they are slightly pinkishwhite. And I like them. XD; But, yes, you are right about everything you said. XD I think I'll try to find another hair-accessory and another neck-accessory and try again. :P Thank you very much. ^ ^
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Lol, I just realized I gave you lots of criticism but no compliments. I do like how you used that wig, I can't pull it off for the life of me. The leg warmer layering is really clever as well, and I love how you added tiny details like the ring. (:
And those glasses do look a lot better.
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Haha, don't worry about it. :P If all I ever got were compliments, I wouldn't get any better, would I? XD Though, thank you for noticing those. ^ ^~! This wig is actually a bit intimidating. This is the first outfit I've tried with it. XD;
I'm currently working on finding something to replace the scarf. xD;
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This is a tough one to rate. One one hand I really like it, but then I notice that the shades of pink you useddon't exactly match, nor do your greens. You should get rid of the scarf for starters, it doesn't match anything and it's just kind of just a distraction. Maybe use a choker instead? It doesn't have to be pink, green, or brown, maybe just the archuchess choker? Overall I think it's very nice and I really do like it. ^_^ 7/10. ^^
Thank you. ^ ^
I tweaked my outfit a little bit. I changed to a green choker to keep the balance of color.
And, I know the pinks don't match. :P But they look nice together, I think. xD;
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Hehe, thanks. ^ ^
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9/10, it's really cute. i love the little hints of brown.
Blir and Psychosis: Thank you both. ^ ^
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