I quite like this one ;). Any suggestions or comments?

Well it's... ok but the Hookah is out of place, and the hair choice doesn't match your theme.

7/10

Hmm okay, thanks! I'll try and find some other hair ;).

The boa doesn't really fit. Otherwise looks great.

9 / 10

its cute i like it

Thank you both! I think it looks much better now :)

I like it :)
well, the hair colour would be better pink or violet (?) to match the dress but it's cute, I like the choice of clothes n_n

Nice color coordinating. :)