okay, do you see it as a mess, or do you actually see that I'm going for something a tad more RLish.

Hn I think it looks good, and decent. Well done ❤

I don't think I've ever actually seen someone walking down the street wearing an outfit like that, but your HA is definitely made up of RL-style clothing. :P It's cute. :)

moving this to rate my avatar (non-numerical rating/like/dislike)

okay thank you, and sorry about that.

It's so good! I reallllyy like your HA

I like it. It looks young and punky ^_^ When I lived in berlin I've seen a lot of girls dressing this way, not exactly the same, but it was pretty close :)

what's there to not "get"?

It's cute! Love it!

I think it's pretty cute. The only thing that bothers me is the color of the hair ribbon. The colors look too out of place. Besides that I like it.

Lots of my friends rock the shorts/tights/high tops look.

-adore-

ive seen people dressed like that come to my job

Looks good. The hair ribbon while it does match your shorts, since the shorts aren't overly visible it does make the hair ribbon stand out quite a lot.

-adore- ive seen people dressed like that come to my job

oh gosh, really? xD I tired to walk in to the place that I work at in an outfit extremely, similar to this, because I was planning on changing, and my boss looked at me and said ''okay, if you're gonna get high before work, then just get out''

annnyways, since the ribbon sticks out too much should I remove my black corsest so my shorts become more visible?

good and well done

i'd say don't remove the corset, just change the colour of the ribbon, perhaps opt for a different hair accessory all together. i think it looks pretty good but the face is plain and i've seen rl avatars executed better. i think the cardy kinda throws it off and just makes it look like ...? wut

ya, I'm saving up for some makeup. and I just wanted my arms to be dark. keep in mind that this wasn't meant to be completely rlish.

either way i don't think the layering of the cardy is all that flattering, especially since it's more of a gray where as you need a little more black to balance out the high tops. i think your avatar would look pretty good still without the cardy (:

ookay, do you know of any items I could use instead of the cardy? because I looked at it with out the cardy, and it looks rather unbalanced without it, since my legs are really dark.

Try using one of the baseball shirts or a plain long sleeved shirt instead of the cardy. But personally I disagree with a lot of the other users, I really like the cardigan underneath it, it's more of a coal color instead of such a harsh black.

Personally I would remove the black corset though. It's really not doing anything for the HA, and with the shorts visible, the hair ribbon wouldn't look so out of place. Personally I'd either remove the corset or change the hair accessory all together.