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Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
Jeannie
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So I had the random urge to draw today, and came up with this:

Comments/critiques/criticism? .o.

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Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
Wuppie
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Ezeo

-no critique just jawdropping- Woooww.. It's to pretty! I love how you did the hair, the dress! Ohh.. The eyes really draw my attention (love the lashes) Do you plan on colouring it?

Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
Cherish_308
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that's gorgeous! the hair, the dress... the expression! she looks like she's eagerly awaiting someone ❤️ pokes colour it! then give it to me! lol jk

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Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
The Gourmand
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Eeee, Jeannie! That looks so elegant. A

I did a quick blueline of the shoulders and arms, but you don't have to use it. n_n

I have to agree with , I love those lashes. ❤️

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Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
moedeath
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i love it- but there's a couple things that bother me: her midsection. it looks very flat, compared to the dynamics of the rest. experiment with thicker and thinner lines to make it look like she is more of a person and not just a beautiful head and tits on a cardboard stick.

your lines are very scratchy. i always think of this as like, not trusting your own line. do a sketch and then line without stopping. it doesn't look sketchy or like a preliminary like this- it looks like a beautiful finished work where you got nervous inking because it is not perfect. don't worry if it is not perfect, and get in the habit of trusting your line.

see how gorgeous the face and hair look, with those clean and confidant lines? the rest of her should look like that too!

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