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Jun 26, 2009 16 years ago
Flaaffy_122
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http://www.subeta.net/gallery.php/user:Flaaffy

It's the only picture there. xD Stabs gallery I really didn't use any ref in this picture. I'm just worried about how it looks. You can ignore the words if you want. Right now I'm just worried about the character. Crits and comments would be lovely. Try giving me some tips and stuff. I'm still learning after all. :3


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Jul 2, 2009 16 years ago
The Plushie Collector
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It's really nice and I really like it. It is obvious your hand is steady (hope that is the right way to say it in English). The character is really good, but you better make a lineart if you are going to colour it digitally, or use inc quills to make the lines darker black. If you are working digitally, don't draw the words, just make them in the program. I say you make a heart on another paper/file/layer and add it later in the background. I find the work really emotional you can truelly fill the pain, and if it's some dark colour it may even be better.

I hope I helped a bit ^^ Please keep on the good work.

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Jul 2, 2009 16 years ago
Flaaffy_122
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Thanks! :3 That's why I didn't outline the words. I figured it looked better if I made 'em on the computer, but I do leave it in sketch so I know what I want later on. xD

Thanks for the tips! :3


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Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
Flaaffy_122
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Thanks, Winterelf. :3 I was hoping my anatomy was correct, and it looks correct to me, but it's always nice to get another opinion. xD

Hopefully I could use some kind of program to finish the art soon. Only has MS Paint atm owo;


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Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
Okami_860
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Thats really good, looking at it, I can not see anything that you would need to fix. I hope you colour it. ^^

Jul 5, 2009 16 years ago
Lightlode
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I think that it would to try to keep things even and in the same scale. For example, the right hoof and the left hoof that the creature is standing with are different sizes.



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