So I'm making my overlay for Jae-Sun, Oleg's partner in crime at dance school. He's not properly trained, but a bitchin' breakdancer that does nice contemporary when the mood is right.

I like celinox, they're lean and sleek, not over muscled, but they're also not thin like a montre or something. But not giant like a Archan. Anyway, I just used the galactic pose and redrew it (didn't change much of anything actually) and added his colors.

Wondering how the colors work and if I should add more spots. Not sure if I'm going to add any accessories. He could have some, he is a fashion-challenged Korean boy. Not sure what though. Haven't shaded cause I'm still getting the hang of subeta shading. My own is far different.

That's really good. I think shading would make it a million times better, though. But the colours work great! I'm just wondering whether you should change the spikes colours, because they don't really match with the rest of the colours. But other than that, it's great!

I plan on making them white with blue shading, I just did a base coat in an aqua color.

But thanks :3 Trying to shade it D:

The lines look a bit... blunt? The fur on it's ears aren't pointy and wispy, they're blunt and flat... Hope that makes somewhat sense. :/