On whim last night I finally finished Bacteria’s story. Mind giving me your input on it, or correcting any grammar flaws?

CLICK HERE! : Oh and fair warning, it's a tad bit long x.x

Any and all input is very much appreciated!

Oh wow. I can really say I read all of it, and enjoyed it all! I love your writing style, I was feeling like I was right there next to him. I wish I could write like that. I also love your bright ideas. It is worth the time to read it. Zombies are very cool, and I've always liked the undead. Great story, just wonderous. I'd love to read more of your stuff. : )

blushes Aw, dear, you totally just made me smile. Thank you so much for the compliments, and I am rather happy that you enjoy reading it.

Heh, you're very welcome.

I was wondering if you had anything else I could read? I'm a bit bored right now and need a boost of good writing to clear my current writer's block. :/