Or something along those lines. I should really time myself! This is my most detailed, biggest, best piece I've done. For myself. When I started I was practicing female anatomy, when I finished... I produced a masterpiece... I think.

I easily get an ego about my artwork then I go look at or and feel like poop. XD

The only thing I'm feeling IFFY about is the lips, I personally can't think of any other way to draw them. I wanted the mouth to be open a little but it just doesn't work for me. :(

I DID IT I THINK. CRITIQUE??

Lol, I was already watching you in the SB while you were drawing this.. xD I like it so far.. Nothing wrong with the lips, I think it just might work for you like this. Perhaps you can do something with the colouring so the lips look how you wanted to? (idea; the part which is close to the opening of the mouth a bit darker so it looks like her lips are opened for a reaaaaal small bit)

Just updated the sketch (FIXXING THE LIPS TO HOW I WANTED OMGAHD.)

Shit. xD

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Wuppie, that's what I would do if I could color. -sucks at life- D:

Thats why I felt I needed to do the lines to give it shape.

K now go colour it.

That looks like somethin' bitching right there. I'm loving your lines and the colouring so far. The only crit I have is with the hands. Some fingers are lacking some joints while others a bending the wrong way.

Just finished coloring.

Fraulein, I'll have to watch out for that next time. I'm far too lazy to fix all that now that I've finished coloring. :c

OMG! that's one gorgeous piece of art :o

: pfft, you just made me feel like poop.

ROCK that hair, woman. D;

My only suggestion about lips next time is that when you stretch your mouth into a smile, your upper lip is a little less pouty than what you have it. n_n

i love it! the colors especially. and her big old hands and little birdy tat are so cute!

next time i'd make the upper lip like... less like an M and more like a ( filiiped over, right? like not really 2 humps, only like... SLIGHTLY two humps. because when your mouth is open it kinda stretches out. and also, make the corners of the mouth more cornery. like taper more.. less thick. hahaha weird crit....

LOLOL. Nice little birdie tat ;D

Can u b drawin 4 me now pls??

Seriously... it's perfect. I can't even think of one thing wrong with it. @

[edit] Oh, wait, now I can :S

The fingers on the left hand (i.e the one withour rings) look a little iffy to me D:

Don't feel like poop! This is really good, you know! :D

My god, I've been squealing when I saw this on my comments. Seriously, your lines are amazing! ❤️

About the lips, I agree with . When you open you mouth, it stretches and.. yeah. I'm gonna stop there because I'm pretty much gonna repeat what she said. xD;

The coloring is really good, btw. ❤️ The only suggestion I have for next time is to find a steady light source. o: I don't know, but I can't tell where it is.. unless you have more than one light source?

Re-did the coloring and reshaped the mouth. Also removed the lame frill xD

: Oooh, nice~ Although I sorta liked the gray frill. :B

I love the shading on the legs.

This is so adorable :o I can't see anything wrong with this~

girl i hope you are putting that cute tat back on her chest!!!

this is really cute, i love it so much!

Omg, I adore it! That's amazing! And it looks exactly like my hair if I had an eensy bit longer bangs! 8D

That is gorgeous! I love it. You did such an excellent job.

The only thing I might mention is that the hand looks a little fat (the fingers are short and the main part of the hand is a little wide?). But maybe you meant to do that.

Like I said, great job.

this is absolutely amazing collage, a masterpiece at that . and the colouring is superb. :O