I have two sketches i did and did some of the coloring but cant get the rest right is there any one here who could help

Perhaps you should post exactly what it is you need to be colored and how much you are paying for it to be colored?

here is a link to it here that is one of them

Im not sure about price as ive never did anything like this

it's kindof difficult to see specifically what is going on in the picture. SO it may be hard for me to help you out, though I could always try I am not sure.