This is my attempt at a Ladysmith Splicer from Bioshock! What do you think? What should I change? All opinions welcome, especially constructive criticism!

EDIT: I have since changed my HA.

Ah wow, great job! The gun is perfect, though... I guess you've changed it since haven't you?! I was going to say that your outfit wasn't quite a dress, but. Do you mind taking a screen of the Ladysmith Splicer set? I'd love to see it.

Oh yeah, I did change it. Nobody had anything so say so I just went along haha. Here's a link!