I decided to make a rather simple avatar. Whatcha think? O:

I like it ;) I'd take the shorts;; also, take the rings and arm bangle, and try something golden/cream to match the eyes ^^

I like the colours and it is pleasing to the eye, :P 8/10.

Wow. That rocks!

10/10

9/10

Very VERY nice

i like it a lot tho i have some problems on the skirt 9/10

That's really pretty! ❤ I'm not sure what I can suggest for you. 9/10 ^_^

I actually like the colour scheme~ I'm not really a fan of the hair you are using, but I think it looks quite good like that c: 8/10 ❤️

9.9/10 You have an absolutely gorgeous HA~. It can be hard to pull off an interesting avatar while using only two colors (especially with varying shades). The only problem I have is with the lips. Maybe try something of a more "natural" color, like the Salmon Lip Gloss or Showbunny Double Lip Gloss?

Oddly enough, its the garland that stands out to me- Perhaps change one of your streaks to make it a little less standing-out-ish? Really, though, this is like picking invisible nits.